BreadKing's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lim!t]

Too many dissonances! Some stuff is pretty good but other parts are too messy. Overall its okay.

[Explorers]

Blatant copt of Hinkik - Explorers. Stop.

[Gotta Sweep Sweep Sweep]

Obvious copy. Prepare for this song to be deleted.

[The 7 seas]

Scouting seems a tad bit too unfair. How about I report you for stealing someone else's music?

[Press Start]

A blatant copy recorded from Geometry Dash. Never return from Newgrounds. We don't want people like you posting illegitimate music.

[Blood Moon-Waltz (Instrumental)-SVTFOE]

Nice copy. Prepare to get this deleted.

[Vibe]

Ya boi its preeeeetty gucci. Ok but for real, this one sounded better than your last. However with music comes criticism. So this track has a lot of dissonance at 0:30, and at 0:50 it starts to sound like your other songs. I suggest to experiment with other instruments next time. Nice Job on getting whitelisted!

[Brainwash [Energetic edit]]

I really like this a lot! The bass is awesome; wish I could make basses like that. The entire song fits really well together, it's obvious that a lot of effort was spent on this. Also, I really like how there's like the energy within the song itself! Everything, especially the bass, sound so hyper, and that's a good thing. My only problem is that the song itself is pretty repetitive in its tone use. Still, this is pretty good!

AxiomTheoryEDM responds:

Cheers man really appreciate your feedback 😁 I love the word hyper

[It's Over]

I like it. Some of the sounds are really good like at 2:20. Probably my favorite song from you because everything is almost so good together :D Not five stars since sone stuff like mixing cpuld improve, and the percussion is meh. But this is REALLY good. Sad to see how this has such a low rating, which believe is undeserved. Like one star? Really?

Erso responds:

Wow thank you I guess :D Idk about percussion, what do you exactly mean by it, do you mean those wack SFX at the very beginning or what?
Also I didn't understand why this was rated so low either. Don't get me wrong, I understand it isn't the best thing to ever exist but one star just really sucks.

[The Legendary Battle]

Quite an improvement from Unstable. I really like the drops. You're getting closer and closer to Xtrullor's style! Some of the sound choices are weird but still quite unique. The beginning sequences, either before or after drops, are not as good as say the drops (I really really like the drops), but better than your previous songs. For the piano at the beginning, I would make it lower pitched and add higher, less frequent tones along with it so that it doesn't sound bad. Also for the choir, maybe I'd suggest something different as it sounds iffy. Also you should make it part of the background noise, not melody, like the choir should play whole notes instead of being identical to the beat.

Erso responds:

Yeah, I think you're right about the choir. For strengthening up the melody I definitely don't need to use something like choir or strings as it's meant to be a beatiful long sound for harmonization.

I liked the second drop myself. I think the first one was kinda "unstablish" yet I have this messy but powerful second one :D

Couldn't really understand what did you want to say about the piano. Did you mean the repeating notes sound bad?

Please dm me so I can get your review more exactly.